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diff --git a/doc/lispintro/ChangeLog b/doc/lispintro/ChangeLog
index 13bc65eef4a..1ac7258e85a 100644
--- a/doc/lispintro/ChangeLog
+++ b/doc/lispintro/ChangeLog
@@ -1,3 +1,8 @@
+2014-07-03  Glenn Morris  <rgm@gnu.org>
+
+        * emacs-lisp-intro.texi (Note for Novices, Finding More, Conclusion):
+        "Online" help doesn't mean what it used to any more.
+
 2014-06-23  Glenn Morris  <rgm@gnu.org>
 
         * Makefile.in (%.texi): Disable implicit rules.
diff --git a/doc/lispintro/emacs-lisp-intro.texi b/doc/lispintro/emacs-lisp-intro.texi
index 6001e3d0084..7ff91758670 100644
--- a/doc/lispintro/emacs-lisp-intro.texi
+++ b/doc/lispintro/emacs-lisp-intro.texi
@@ -903,7 +903,7 @@ file, @file{cl.el}, that adds many Common Lisp features to Emacs Lisp.)
 If you don't know GNU Emacs, you can still read this document
 profitably.  However, I recommend you learn Emacs, if only to learn to
 move around your computer screen.  You can teach yourself how to use
-Emacs with the on-line tutorial.  To use it, type @kbd{C-h t}.  (This
+Emacs with the built-in tutorial.  To use it, type @kbd{C-h t}.  (This
 means you press and release the @key{CTRL} key and the @kbd{h} at the
 same time, and then press and release @kbd{t}.)
 
@@ -4657,7 +4657,7 @@ specialized library, such as a law library or an engineering library,
 rather than a general library.  Each library, or file, contains
 functions that relate to a particular topic or activity, such as
 @file{abbrev.el} for handling abbreviations and other typing
-shortcuts, and @file{help.el} for on-line help.  (Sometimes several
+shortcuts, and @file{help.el} for help.  (Sometimes several
 libraries provide code for a single activity, as the various
 @file{rmail@dots{}} files provide code for reading electronic mail.)
 In @cite{The GNU Emacs Manual}, you will see sentences such as ``The
@@ -18685,9 +18685,9 @@ easy-to-read description of Emacs Lisp.  It is written not only for
 experts, but for people who know what you know.  (The @cite{Reference
 Manual} comes with the standard GNU Emacs distribution.  Like this
 introduction, it comes as a Texinfo source file, so you can read it
-on-line and as a typeset, printed book.)
+on your computer and as a typeset, printed book.)
 
-Go to the other on-line help that is part of GNU Emacs: the on-line
+Go to the other built-in help that is part of GNU Emacs: the built-in
 documentation for all functions and variables, and @code{find-tag},
 the program that takes you to sources.